Well after learning from what other have had to say about my concept I have made some adjustments. What I have learned is that I need to make my application as user friendly as possible. I need to ensure that my application does a good job providing insight to those who want to go out to bars and would be willing to use my application on a regular basis.
I didn't completely change my venture concept I just managed to twerk it. I think being an entrepreneur means learning to make adjustments not completely retooling what I have done to this point because I have been successful.

Hi Ben!
ReplyDeleteWish there was more for me to give you feedback on! What I can glean from your post is that it's an app that has to do with bars and going out, possibly from a college scene?
I'd love to give you feedback, so feel free to contact if you flesh this post out more!
(P.S. I think the word you were looking for is 'tweak' not 'twerk' haha)
Here's my post: http://memazal.blogspot.com/2016/04/magnefit-venture-concept-20.html
Hi Ben!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you about not completely scrapping our previous ideas, but I do think you can always find things that need improvement! That's how a business grows and expands.
Here's my blog! http://kellyquinnart.blogspot.com/2016/04/venture-concept-no-2.html
Ben,
ReplyDeleteI think your idea is great and has real potential. I can relate this app to how UF has videos of the gym on their website to show how crowded it is. I am not much of a club/bar person, but this app would come in handy for finding the least crowded one if I did want to go to one. It would have been best to put your new venture concept on this post. I checked out your old one and was able to understand your innovation. In order for your business plan to run smoother, categories and segmenting into paragraphs are formats that I find work best. Otherwise I like your business idea and hope to see it in the future. If you get a chance, please check out my venture concept at http://innovationnation101.blogspot.com/2016/04/venture-concept-no-2.html.
Hi Ben!
ReplyDeleteI wish there was more of an outline as to what your concept was, I can't really tell from this post. However, I agree that I think it is important to make your application as friendly as possible!
Here is a link to my post:
http://paigecarlent3003.blogspot.com/2016/04/venture-concept-no-2.html